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What Makes a Resume Look Good to a Hiring Manager

The short version: a resume looks good to a hiring manager when it answers one question fast, can this person do the job in front of me, and it answers it with numbers, not adjectives. Everything else, the font, the two-page rule, the “results-driven professional” line, is decoration. I have hired around forty people over the past twelve years running my own business, and the resumes that got interviews were never the prettiest ones. They were the clearest ones.

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The seven-second scan is real, and it’s brutal

There’s an old eye-tracking study from The Ladders that found recruiters spend roughly 6 to 8 seconds on a first pass of a resume before deciding whether to keep reading. I used to think that number was exaggerated. It isn’t. When I’m hiring for anything, a project manager, a content person, a virtual assistant, I open a stack of applications on a Sunday evening and I am not reading paragraphs. My eyes go straight to job titles, dates, and the first line under each role. If that first line is generic, I have already half decided to move on.

What survives the scan is specificity. “Managed social media accounts” gets skimmed and forgotten. “Grew Instagram from 4,200 to 31,000 followers in 11 months, driving a 22% increase in inbound leads” gets read twice. The second one took the candidate maybe thirty extra seconds to write. It probably cost them an extra interview.

Why so many resumes now sound identical

Here’s the uncomfortable bit nobody selling resume templates wants to say out loud: since AI writing tools became normal, hiring managers have started reading dozens of resumes that all use the exact same phrasing. “Proven track record.” “Detail-oriented team player.” “Passionate about driving results.” These weren’t cliches five years ago because fewer people used them at once. Now half the pile sounds like it came out of the same prompt, because it did.

I sat with a client last year, a small marketing agency owner in Manchester, going through 60-odd applications for an account manager role. She flagged eleven resumes as “suspiciously similar.” Same structure, same three-word power phrases, same vague achievement bullets with no numbers attached. Not one of the eleven got an interview, not because AI-assisted writing is a crime, but because none of them said anything a human being couldn’t have guessed without reading the resume at all. The polish had erased the person.

Use AI to tighten your grammar if you want. But the actual content, the numbers, the client names, the specific tools you used, that has to come from your own memory of doing the job. That’s the part a language model can’t invent for you, and it’s the only part a hiring manager cares about.

A real example: two candidates, one role, one obvious winner

A few years ago I was hiring for a part-time social media and admin support role, remote, about 20 hours a week. Two candidates made it to the final shortlist. I’ll call them Candidate A and Candidate B, because the details matter more than the names.

Candidate A’s resume had a strong, well-designed template. It listed “Social Media Management,” “Content Creation,” “Administrative Support” as headers, with three or four bullet points under each describing responsibilities. Nice layout. Nothing wrong with the grammar. But every bullet described a task, not an outcome. “Scheduled posts across multiple platforms.” “Handled email inbox and calendar management.” “Assisted with client communications.”

Candidate B’s resume was plainer, honestly a bit ugly, default Word template, no colour. But the first bullet under her most recent role read: “Took a client’s LinkedIn from 8 posts a month with under 2% engagement to 20 posts a month averaging 6.4% engagement, adding roughly 300 profile followers in a quarter.” Second bullet: “Rebuilt the inbox system using folders and templates, cutting average response time from 48 hours to under 6.”

I interviewed both. Candidate A was pleasant and competent in the interview. Candidate B I hired within the week, because her resume had already answered the question I was going to ask in the interview anyway: what happens when I give you a messy situation and leave you to it. She’d shown me, in two lines, that she notices problems and fixes them with something measurable to show for it.

That’s the whole game. Not better design. Better evidence.

Numbers over adjectives, always

If you take one thing from this post, take this: every bullet point on your resume should contain a number if it’s humanly possible to include one. Not every number needs to be a percentage or a pound figure. It can be a count, a time saved, a team size, a volume handled.

  • Weak: “Responsible for customer support tickets.” Strong: “Handled 60 to 80 support tickets a day across email and chat, maintaining a 94% satisfaction score.”
  • Weak: “Improved efficiency of onboarding process.” Strong: “Cut new-client onboarding from 9 days to 4 by building a standard checklist and template pack.”
  • Weak: “Managed a small team.” Strong: “Managed a team of 5 part-time VAs across two time zones, hitting a 98% on-time delivery rate.”

If you don’t have a number because the role never tracked one, estimate honestly and say so, “roughly” and “approximately” are fine words. Hiring managers know real work is rarely perfectly measured. What they’re checking is whether you think in outcomes at all, or only in tasks. This matters enormously for anyone applying to remote and flexible roles, where trust has to be built on paper before anyone meets you. If you’re looking at a virtual assistant job from home, the client can’t watch you work, so your resume has to do the convincing your presence would normally do in an office.

The format that works, step by step

Forget the debate about one page versus two. Length is not the issue, padding is. Here’s the structure I look for, and the one I tell people I’m coaching to use.

  1. Header: name, phone, email, city (not full address), and one link, LinkedIn or a portfolio. Skip the photo unless you’re in a country or industry where it’s standard.
  2. A three-line summary, not an objective statement. Say what you do, how long you’ve done it, and one headline result. “Customer support specialist with 6 years’ experience across SaaS and ecommerce, currently managing a 4,000-ticket monthly queue with a 96% CSAT score.” That’s it, three lines, done.
  3. Work experience in reverse order, with job title, company, dates, and 3 to 5 bullets per role, weighted toward your most recent and most relevant jobs. Older or less relevant roles get one line each.
  4. A skills section that’s specific. Not “communication” and “teamwork.” Name the tools: Asana, HubSpot, Zendesk, Excel pivot tables, Canva, whatever you use daily.
  5. Education, briefly, unless you’re under three years out of school and it’s your strongest card.

That’s five sections. If your resume needs a sixth, it’s usually because you’re padding with “hobbies and interests” or a lengthy “professional statement” nobody asked for. Cut it.

What to leave off entirely

A few things I see constantly that do nothing but cost you scanning time:

  • References available upon request. Everyone knows this. It wastes a line.
  • A generic objective statement written about your own career goals rather than the employer’s needs. Nobody hiring cares what you want, at least not on page one.
  • Every single job you’ve ever had since 2004. Anything more than 10 to 12 years back can usually be summarised in a single “earlier career” line.
  • Fonts and colour schemes that fight the ATS software. Most modern applicant tracking systems parse resumes reasonably well now, that panic about “the robot will reject you” is overstated for most small and mid-size employers, but heavy graphics, text boxes, and columns still confuse some older systems. A clean, single-column layout in a standard font, Calibri, Arial, Georgia, is safer and it’s also easier for a tired human to read at 9pm.

Tailoring without rewriting from scratch every time

Nobody has time to write a brand new resume for every application, and hiring managers don’t expect one. What they do notice is a resume that’s clearly been sent to fifty jobs unchanged, versus one where the top third has been adjusted to match the actual posting.

My practical method: keep one master resume with every achievement you’ve ever quantified, six years’ worth if needed. For each application, spend ten minutes swapping the summary line and reordering bullets so the most relevant achievements sit at the top of each role, not buried at the bottom. If the job posting mentions “high-volume inbox management” three times, and you’ve got a bullet about cutting response time, that bullet moves to the top. Small edit, big difference in how relevant you look on that seven-second scan.

This matters more than people think for remote and flexible roles specifically, where competition per posting is often higher because geography stops being a filter. If you’ve read what to know before paying for a site like FlexJobs, you already know the volume of applicants per remote listing can run into the hundreds. Tailoring the top third of your resume is often the only thing separating you from someone with an identical background.

The same logic applies whether you’re chasing customer service work from home jobs, answering a virtual assistant vacancy, or hunting for something flexible around school hours through part-time remote jobs. The job titles change. The rule doesn’t: specific evidence beats generic claims, every single time, in every industry I have ever hired in.

The uncomfortable truth about “good” resumes

Here’s the bit most resume advice tiptoes around. A resume that looks good to a hiring manager is not necessarily one that looks good to you, or that flatters your ego about your career. It’s a sales document, and the customer is a stranger with 80 other applications open in browser tabs. That means cutting your favourite project because it’s irrelevant to this job. It means admitting a role only had modest results and quantifying the modest result honestly rather than inflating it, because hiring managers who’ve been doing this for years, and I include myself, can smell an inflated claim within one follow-up question in the interview. Overclaiming on paper just moves the awkward moment from the resume stage to the interview stage. It doesn’t remove it.

The resumes I trust most are slightly boring to read and completely believable. That combination, boring and believable, is what “good” means in this context. Exciting and vague is what gets deleted.

Frequently asked questions

Should a resume be one page or two?

Neither number is the rule. If you have under 8 years of relevant experience, one page is usually achievable without cutting anything important. Beyond that, two pages is fine as long as every line earns its place. Three pages almost always means padding, and hiring managers notice.

Do hiring managers reject resumes because of ATS keyword scanning?

Less often than resume articles claim. Most modern applicant tracking systems used by small and mid-size employers parse plain, single-column resumes fine and pass them through to a human. The bigger risk is heavy graphics or multi-column layouts confusing the parser, not a lack of keywords. Write for the human reader first and the keywords will usually appear naturally anyway.

Is it bad to use AI to help write my resume?

Using AI to tidy grammar or structure is fine. The problem is when the actual content, your achievements and numbers, gets invented or generalised by the tool rather than pulled from your real work. Hiring managers now see enough AI-generic phrasing that vague “results-driven” language reads as a red flag rather than a strength. Keep the facts yours.

What’s the single biggest mistake people make on their resume?

Listing responsibilities instead of results. “Managed the inbox” describes a task anyone could claim. “Cut average response time from 48 hours to 6” describes a result only you can prove happened. Every bullet should aim for the second version.

Sources worth reading

Related reading: How to Format a Resume in Microsoft Word (The Steps That Get It Read) and Is FlexJobs Worth Paying For When You’re Job Hunting Remote?.

Published and maintained by the Lilach Bullock team, covering marketing, AI and business growth.
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